Monday, October 8th, 2007 05:23 pm


I figure I ought to get back in the habit of writing for NaNo, so here's today's free writing exercise:

Claire picked up the phone on the fourth ring, murmuring a sleepy ‘hello’ into the receiver.

“Claire! You wouldn’t believe what I just discovered!” It was the excited voice of her friend Linda, the newspaper reporter. “It’s about the Dobson case.”

“The Dobson – you mean that murder inquiry? What are you doing looking into that? I told you, it’s too dangerous.”

“The very one! And, please, when have I ever let a little danger stop me?” She gave a throaty laugh. “Besides, you can’t be mad at me. I have some information I think will crack the case wide open.”

Claire flicked on the bedside lamp and grabbed the pencil and paper on the nightstand. “Okay, shoot.” Any sleepiness was long gone – she’d been working on this case for months, and this might just be the break she needed. Linda was a great investigative reporter, and Claire didn’t doubt her ability to ferret out information not always accessible to the police.

“Not now, I have to check something out. How about we meet at noon, Café Simon?”

“At least give me the bones of it,” Claire said, tapping the pencil agitatedly against the pad.

“Look, I’m in a bit of a hurry here.” In the background, Claire heard Linda starting her car. “I’ll meet you at noon.”

“NO!” Claire practically shouted. “You have to tell me now, at least a hint.”

“Is this about that superstition?” Linda sounded exasperated.

“It’s not superstition. It’s nearly fact. If you know something big, and make plans to tell someone later, you’re almost always killed in the intervening time,” Claire said stubbornly.

“That’s just silly fiction. One of the most overused cliché plot devices I’ve heard of. Well, outside of the two romance novel plots, that is.” Linda gave a chuckle.

“C’mon, what’ll it hurt to give me a hint, just to be on the safe side?”

Linda sighed. “Fine, but if I do this and die anyway, promise you’ll give up your stupid theory?”

“Agreed.”

“Okay, I’m typing it in now, I have it set to a time-delay. If I don’t meet you at noon, there should be an e-mail for you at 12:15. Are you happy now?”

“Somewhat. Please be careful, Linda.”

“I always am.” And she hung up.

***

At 12:15, Claire stared at the message on her PDA.

“You’re so silly, I’m not even going to stop this going through. Say hi to me sitting across from you!”

Claire glanced at the empty seat across the table and shook her head sadly.



In further other news, pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease let the Indians win tonight. That is all.
Monday, October 8th, 2007 10:59 pm (UTC)
Octopus! He is having fun!
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 12:30 am (UTC)
"Just to let you know I fertilized your Caviar for you. *nudge nudge*"
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 01:50 am (UTC)
Hurray, you know how to pluralize "octopus"! :D (And it doesn't surprise me that you would...)
Friday, October 12th, 2007 01:31 am (UTC)
I can't take all the credit - Pen told me! :D
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 07:34 am (UTC)
Hee! Love the traveling octopus ;)

Love the story too. *bounce*

Which reminds me, I have a challenge to get writing on. Suddenly I need to plan the thing and I don't have the first clue what to write now. I am still trying to pick a fandom for crying out loud!
Friday, October 12th, 2007 01:35 am (UTC)
Slips of paper and a hat? (for choosing)

I seriously need to get back in the habit of writing if I'm going to survive NaNo this year!
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 08:48 am (UTC)
I-told-you-sos are awesome.
Friday, October 12th, 2007 01:34 am (UTC)
And I so rarely get to say them! I'm living vicariously through my fiction. :(
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 10:08 am (UTC)
ah yes, a fabulous yankees first round exit from the playoffs. see you in the pink slip line joe torre. love it.
Friday, October 12th, 2007 01:33 am (UTC)
And yet, STILL no news on Torre. With all the 'blah blah blah threaten threaten threaten you lose and he's fired' rhetoric you'd think they'd can him already. Figures they were just blowing smoke.

Now, if only the Indians can off the Red Sox, and we can have a World Series with someone OTHER than the 'in' teams (personally, I'm kinda rooting for an Indians/Rockies series, but I'm not opposed to the Diamondbacks).
Tuesday, October 9th, 2007 03:13 pm (UTC)
<3 octopus.

And i really liked that snippet. Fantastic.
(Anonymous)
Wednesday, October 10th, 2007 11:52 pm (UTC)
The trip through Scandinavia has taken a decided turn for the crappy!!! Save Me!!!!!

-The Stephalopod